Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I think receiving feedback from students in the class does help a lot. The type of comment that I find most helpful is when they point out my grammar mistake because I am not good at grammar. when I feedback out and read other people stories I do get ideas for my stories for my next writing. I am happy with the blog where people can comment on your introduction. I probably not change anything on my blog.

I think this picture is awesome because of receiving feedback can really make you grow. Source

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  1. UnknownApril 16, 2018 at 9:06 AM

    Hey there again, Jay!
    I agree with your thoughts on receiving feedback from other students in this class. I think it is so beneficial to see a different viewpoint. It helps me so much when someone looks at my writing in a different way than I do. I also find it very useful when I read other people's stories. It gives me some ideas about possible things that I can do in the future.

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